tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post4332133351457650259..comments2024-01-10T23:14:18.582-08:00Comments on Writing:My Adventure in Words: Tina HelmuthErnie W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/08636631778935356087noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post-36648480586130245052007-08-10T08:51:00.000-07:002007-08-10T08:51:00.000-07:00Ernie,1) Time for a new post.2) Thanks for sending...Ernie,<BR/>1) Time for a new post.<BR/>2) Thanks for sending me the pic from OCW.<BR/>3) I posted it on my blog. Good photo.<BR/>Thanks, TammyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post-58841460118234346552007-07-27T13:06:00.000-07:002007-07-27T13:06:00.000-07:00I agree, Christina. And because of you and Ernie, ...I agree, Christina. And because of you and Ernie, I went ahead and sent her mine. Later I will put an advertisement on my blog referring folks over to her. What an awesome service Tina does. It is fun to read the works of others and Tina's corrections. Very educational. Thanks, Ms. Berry, for starting us off.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post-78046673937718022432007-07-27T00:45:00.000-07:002007-07-27T00:45:00.000-07:00Thanks for sending it in. We've got to get other p...Thanks for sending it in. We've got to get other people to submit their work to Tina by doing just what you just did--blogging about it and talking it up!Christina Tarabochiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17917807123445539587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post-79986375674534408452007-07-26T07:49:00.000-07:002007-07-26T07:49:00.000-07:00Hi Ernie,I happened by Tina's blog and saw her cri...Hi Ernie,<BR/>I happened by Tina's blog and saw her critique of Sacrificial Lie there. She does an amazing job! <BR/><BR/>See you next week ...Lynettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12424933935528963708noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20385969.post-13730038827818199562007-07-24T16:24:00.000-07:002007-07-24T16:24:00.000-07:00Hi Ernie,I read Tina's changes at the bottom of he...Hi Ernie,<BR/>I read Tina's changes at the bottom of her critique and I'm very impressed. Excellent changes. If I can be so bold, I would recommend two more. <BR/>1) I think the word "about" should be deleted in the sentence regarding the baseball books. I think it is left from a deleted sentence. <BR/>2) The other change is regarding the sentence, “I can’t talk much longer.” I think this is only the second sentence spoken by the mysterious caller, so it doesn't make sense to me. They haven't talked at all, so it can't be "much longer." Maybe change to, "I can't talk long." Or "I can't talk now." I think either of those would work better.<BR/>Otherwise, I LOVE the re-write. Very intriguing! Keep up the good writing. Blessings, TammyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com